
Writing improvement
I think I improve a lot. At the beginning, I was always not serious. But now I know it is not easy like I thought before, I should work hard. Now I want to learn to be careful so that I can make few grammar errors in the essay. I learn how to organize the example and my logic that help me a lot.
I think I improve a lot. At the beginning, I was always not serious. But now I know it is not easy like I thought before, I should work hard. Now I want to learn to be careful so that I can make few grammar errors in the essay. I learn how to organize the example and my logic that help me a lot.
You are doing a lot better, James. I'm glad you are taking this more seriously now and working so hard. Although, don't worry about making grammar errors at first. Just focus on your organization and logic. After that, go back through your essay and fix any mistakes and combine short sentences, etc.
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